hAiKu

I gave myself a challenge of a Haiku that rhymes, about the sunset, without the words sun or sunset.

Enjoy!

Fading into  night

Red glowing ball of  pure light

Now it’s out of sight

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10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. boomiebol
    Aug 24, 2012 @ 01:43:03

    Nice, very nice

    Reply

  2. gladiuspoeticus
    Aug 24, 2012 @ 04:01:08

    Great one, Shola! You extended the concept of Haiku and made life a lot more difficult for many of us 🙂

    Reply

  3. Sandra Adegoke
    Aug 24, 2012 @ 11:42:59

    Extending yourself to greater heights.Wonderful.

    Reply

  4. thoughtsfromanamericanwoman
    Aug 24, 2012 @ 15:46:28

    Lovely – I can visual the sun on a hot day in summer big and beautiful on a cloudless night as it sets, casting its bright shadows on our walls. Blessings – Patty

    Reply

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